As remote work technology becomes increasingly sophisticated, more and more people are choosing to work from home rather than commuting to a traditional office. Some believe this trend grants employees greater autonomy and a better quality of life, while others worry that it undermines team cohesion and hinders career advancement. Please elaborate on your perspective regarding this phenomenon, and explain under what conditions the benefits of remote work for individual career development outweigh its drawbacks.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应（Task Response）：是否完整回应题目要求，观点是否清晰，论证是否充分
连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion）：段落组织是否合理，逻辑是否清晰，连接词是否恰当
词汇资源（Lexical Resource）：词汇是否丰富、准确，搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）：句式是否多样，语法是否正确