As remote work technology becomes increasingly sophisticated, more and more people are choosing to work from home rather than commuting to a traditional office. Some believe this trend grants employees greater autonomy and a better quality of life, while others worry that it undermines team cohesion and hinders career advancement. Please elaborate on your perspective regarding this phenomenon, and explain under what conditions the benefits of remote work for individual career development outweigh its drawbacks.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling