As remote work technology becomes more widespread, many believe that the traditional office-based work model will be completely replaced within the next decade, while others insist that in-person collaboration remains indispensable to organizational culture and career growth. In your view, does this shift toward remote work ultimately benefit individual career development, or does it exacerbate feelings of isolation and inequality in promotion within the workplace? Please state your position and support your argument with concrete examples from specific professions or industries.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确