As remote work technology becomes more widespread, many believe that the traditional office-based work model will be completely replaced within the next decade, while others insist that in-person collaboration remains indispensable to organizational culture and career growth. In your view, does this shift toward remote work ultimately benefit individual career development, or does it exacerbate feelings of isolation and inequality in promotion within the workplace? Please state your position and support your argument with concrete examples from specific professions or industries.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling