As cultural exchanges across the globe become increasingly frequent, many local traditions and festive celebrations are gradually being reshaped by commercialization, and in some cases, replaced by foreign cultural elements. At the same time, some argue that this transformation reflects cultural vitality and adaptability. Between traditional heritage and modern globalization, is it more important to preserve the original form, or is it wiser to embrace change? Discuss both positions, explain your own viewpoint, and provide reasons and concrete examples to support your argument.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling