As cultural exchanges across the globe become increasingly frequent, many local traditions and festive celebrations are gradually being reshaped by commercialization, and in some cases, replaced by foreign cultural elements. At the same time, some argue that this transformation reflects cultural vitality and adaptability. Between traditional heritage and modern globalization, is it more important to preserve the original form, or is it wiser to embrace change? Discuss both positions, explain your own viewpoint, and provide reasons and concrete examples to support your argument.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确