In many developed cities, the proportion of elderly residents continues to rise, while younger workers increasingly migrate to suburbs or rural areas. Some argue that this demographic shift will overburden urban public services and weaken economic vitality; others maintain that a growing elderly population can instead spur the "silver economy" and enhance community cohesion. In your view, what strategy should cities prioritize—investing more in elderly care facilities, or implementing policies to attract young people back? Please elaborate on your position, providing specific reasons and examples to support it.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确