In many countries, young people choose to leave rural areas for large cities, leading to a sharp decline in population and a shrinking of services in rural regions. Some argue that this is a free choice for individuals to pursue better opportunities and should not be interfered with; others contend that governments should adopt policies to encourage young people to stay in or return to rural areas in order to maintain balanced social development. Which position do you support more? Provide reasons and support your argument with specific examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确