With the rapid growth of global tourism, many traditional festivals are gradually evolving into commercialized performances aimed at visitors, while their original significance within local communities is weakening. In response to this trend, some argue that it is a natural expression of cultural vitality and should be encouraged; others worry that it will lead to the disappearance of authentic traditions. In your view, is the commercialization of traditional festivals a necessary form of cultural adaptation, or an irreversible cultural loss? Please state your position and provide examples to support your argument.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确