In today's workplace, the prevalence of remote work has made it increasingly difficult for employers to effectively monitor employee performance, whereas traditional office attendance systems ensure employee engagement. Meanwhile, proponents of flexible work arrangements argue that output-oriented evaluations are far fairer and more efficient than monitoring hours worked. Should the core measure of professional value be based on employees' actual work outcomes or their time spent on the job? Please articulate your stance, providing reasons and concrete examples to support your viewpoint.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确