The widespread adoption of remote work has freed many employees from the constraints of commuting, yet it has simultaneously blurred the boundaries between work and personal life. If the flexibility of working hours comes at the cost of immediacy in team collaboration, while a fixed office location can strengthen the cohesion of corporate culture, then, when weighing the two workplace values of "efficiency above all" versus "belonging first," which model do you support, and please explain your reasoning with specific professional scenarios and examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling