The widespread adoption of remote work has freed many employees from the constraints of commuting, yet it has simultaneously blurred the boundaries between work and personal life. If the flexibility of working hours comes at the cost of immediacy in team collaboration, while a fixed office location can strengthen the cohesion of corporate culture, then, when weighing the two workplace values of "efficiency above all" versus "belonging first," which model do you support, and please explain your reasoning with specific professional scenarios and examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确