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The extinction of the passenger pigeon (Ectopistes migratorius) in the early 20th century is often attributed to overhunting by humans. However, a closer examination of the available evidence suggests that habitat loss and disease, not hunting, were the primary drivers of the species' rapid decline and eventual extinction. First, the passenger pigeon depended on vast tracts of mature beech and oak forests in eastern North America for both food and nesting. During the late 19th century, extensive logging cleared nearly 80% of these forests for agriculture and urban development. This fragmentation reduced the pigeons' primary food sources—acorns and beechnuts—and disrupted their breeding colonies, which required forest areas of at least 100 square kilometers. Without such large, connected habitats, the pigeons could not maintain viable populations. Second, the species was highly susceptible to a parasitic disease, Trichomoniasis, which spread rapidly in dense flocks. Historical records from the 1880s describe numerous sick and dying pigeons exhibiting symptoms consistent with this infection, such as lethargy and swollen throats. The disease likely weakened the birds and lowered their reproductive success, especially as stress from habitat loss increased their vulnerability. Third, hunting pressure was actually concentrated in the eastern United States, but passenger pigeons were also abundant in the western parts of their range, where hunting was minimal. Yet, declines occurred simultaneously across the entire range, suggesting a factor more widespread than localized hunting. Thus, the evidence points to habitat destruction and disease as the main causes, with hunting playing only a minor role.

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The reading claims that habitat loss and disease, rather than overhunting, caused the passenger pigeon's extinction. However, this argument is flawed and ignores key evidence. First, while habitat loss did occur, the passenger pigeon was not as dependent on mature forests as the reading suggests. Historical accounts from the early 1800s describe huge flocks nesting in secondary growth and even in agricultural areas when mast crops were scarce. Moreover, the species had survived previous periods of forest disturbance, such as glacial retreats, and its population was still in the millions even as late as 1870, after decades of logging. Thus, habitat loss alone cannot explain the sudden collapse. Second, the disease theory lacks solid evidence. Trichomoniasis is a common bird disease, but no contemporary records definitively confirm an epidemic among passenger pigeons. The symptoms described in the reading could also be due to stress from hunting or starvation. In fact, the most dramatic population crashes occurred immediately after large-scale hunting events, not during periods of disease outbreaks. Third, the reading’s claim about western populations is misleading. The so-called ‘western range’ was still within the reach of commercial hunters who used telegraph networks and railroads to track and slaughter pigeons in massive numbers. For instance, the last great nesting in Wisconsin in 1871 attracted hunters from hundreds of miles away, and they killed over a million birds in a few weeks. Even in the remote West, hunting pressure was intense and coordinated. Therefore, the overwhelming evidence points to commercial overhunting as the decisive cause of extinction.
📝 คำแนะนำการเขียน Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

Scored 0-30 based on holistic scoring (original 0-5, scaled to 30).

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