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📖 เนื้อเรื่อง

The extinction of the woolly mammoth has long been attributed to human overhunting, but recent evidence suggests that climate change was the primary driver. First, the timing of mammoth decline correlates closely with the rapid warming at the end of the last Ice Age, around 10,000 years ago. As temperatures rose, the open grasslands that mammoths depended on were replaced by dense forests and tundra, reducing their food supply. Second, genetic studies of mammoth remains show a significant loss of genetic diversity well before human populations reached high densities in their habitats. This indicates that populations were already shrinking due to environmental stress, not sudden hunting pressure. Third, human hunting tools from that era were primarily designed for smaller game, and archaeological sites with mammoth kill remains are rare compared to those with other prey. If humans had been the main cause, we would expect more widespread evidence of mammoth hunting. Therefore, the warming climate, not human activity, was the decisive factor in the mammoth’s disappearance.

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The lecture challenges the reading’s claim that climate change alone drove the woolly mammoth to extinction. While the timing of warming is clear, the correlation does not prove causation. In fact, mammoths survived similar warming events in earlier interglacial periods, so temperature change alone cannot explain their final demise. Regarding genetic diversity, the lecture explains that the observed loss of diversity was a consequence of small, isolated populations caused by human hunting fragmentation, not the initial cause of decline. Human hunting does not need to be widespread to have a catastrophic impact; even low-level hunting of slow-reproducing megafauna can drive populations to extinction. Additionally, the scarcity of mammoth kill sites is misleading because early humans likely used mammoth bones and tusks for tools and shelter, which would remove evidence of kills. Moreover, some kill sites do exist, showing that humans did hunt mammoths. Thus, the lecture concludes that human overhunting, combined with climate stress, was the critical factor, and the reading’s dismissal of human impact is unjustified.
📝 คำแนะนำการเขียน Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

Scored 0-30 based on holistic scoring (original 0-5, scaled to 30).

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