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The extinction of the passenger pigeon, once the most abundant bird in North America, is often attributed to overhunting and habitat loss. However, recent research suggests that the species' own biology may have played a more critical role. Three intrinsic factors likely contributed to their rapid demise. First, passenger pigeons bred in massive, dense colonies called 'rookeries,' sometimes containing millions of birds. This extreme sociality meant that when populations fell below a certain threshold, breeding success plummeted because the birds required large numbers to stimulate reproduction and protect against predators. Second, the species had a very low reproductive rate: females laid only a single egg per breeding attempt, and they raised only one chick per year. This slow recruitment could not compensate for any sudden increase in mortality, making the population highly vulnerable to external pressures. Third, passenger pigeons were highly specialized feeders, relying almost exclusively on mast crops (acorns and beechnuts) from deciduous forests. When these food sources failed intermittently, the birds were forced to undertake long, erratic migrations in search of food, which often led to starvation and reduced breeding success. These biological constraints, combined with human exploitation, made the passenger pigeon uniquely susceptible to extinction.

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The reading presents a plausible case for intrinsic biological causes, but the evidence actually points to human activities as the primary drivers. First, while passenger pigeons did breed in dense colonies, historical records show that they also nested in smaller groups successfully when populations were lower, such as during the 1870s after heavy hunting. The idea that they needed millions to breed is overstated; smaller colonies still produced healthy chicks. The real problem was that hunters targeted these colonies mercilessly, killing breeding adults at such a rate that no colony, large or small, could sustain itself. Second, the claim about a low reproductive rate ignores a crucial fact: passenger pigeons had an exceptionally long lifespan, up to 20 years, and they began breeding at a young age. Over a lifetime, a single pair could produce many offspring. The single-egg-per-year pattern is typical of many long-lived birds, such as albatrosses, which are not endangered. The true cause of their decline was the commercial hunting industry, which shipped millions of birds to urban markets. Third, the reliance on mast crops was not a fatal flaw. Passenger pigeons had a remarkable ability to find food over vast distances, and they switched to other seeds and berries when mast was scarce. Historical accounts show they thrived during periods of mast failure before systematic hunting began. In fact, the last massive nesting event in 1871 coincided with a mast failure, yet millions of birds gathered. It was only when hunting pressure became industrialized in the late 1800s that their numbers collapsed, proving that human exploitation was the decisive factor.
📝 คำแนะนำการเขียน Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

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