TOEFL 통합 작문

📖 읽기 지문

The colonization of Mars has been a subject of intense scientific debate. Proponents argue that establishing a permanent human settlement on Mars is both feasible and necessary for the long-term survival of our species. Three main arguments support this view. First, Mars possesses abundant resources, such as water ice and carbon dioxide, which can be converted into breathable oxygen and rocket fuel, making self-sufficiency possible. Second, the Red Planet's proximity to Earth, relative to other celestial bodies, allows for relatively short travel times of about six to nine months, enabling regular supply missions and potential evacuation in emergencies. Third, advances in closed-loop life support systems, which recycle air, water, and waste, have reached a level of maturity that could sustain a small colony for extended periods without resupply. These factors, proponents claim, make Mars colonization a realistic and urgent endeavor.

🎧 듣기 강의

The lecture challenges the feasibility of Mars colonization, arguing that the reading's optimism is unfounded. First, while water ice exists on Mars, extracting and processing it into usable forms requires heavy machinery and continuous energy, which are not yet available in a Martian environment. Moreover, the carbon dioxide atmosphere is too thin and cold to support efficient chemical conversion, making resource utilization far more difficult than suggested. Second, the travel time of six to nine months is actually a major hazard. During this period, astronauts are exposed to cosmic radiation and microgravity, which can cause muscle atrophy, bone loss, and increased cancer risk. Even if a crew arrives safely, the lack of a magnetic field on Mars means surface radiation remains lethal, so any colony would have to be buried underground, complicating construction and daily life. Third, closed-loop life support systems have only been tested in small-scale demonstrations on Earth or in low Earth orbit, not under Martian gravity or with Martian soil. Real-world failures, such as the oxygen generation problem on the International Space Station, show that these systems are fragile and require constant maintenance and spare parts, which would be impossible to source locally in the early years. Therefore, the lecture concludes, the reading's claims are overly optimistic and ignore critical engineering and biological challenges.