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The extinction of the passenger pigeon (Ectopistes migratorius) in the early 20th century is often attributed solely to overhunting by humans. However, a closer examination of the historical and ecological evidence suggests that the species' dramatic decline was primarily driven by natural factors, particularly disease and habitat fragmentation. First, the passenger pigeon's reproductive strategy was highly dependent on massive, synchronized flocking. Historical records indicate that the birds nested in colonies spanning hundreds of square miles, with millions of individuals breeding together. This 'boom-or-bust' strategy made the species extremely vulnerable to any disruption in flock size. A single epidemic, such as the avian disease trichomoniasis, could spread rapidly through such dense aggregations, wiping out entire breeding colonies in a single season. Second, the expansion of American agriculture in the 19th century led to the clearing of vast tracts of deciduous forest, particularly the oak and beech woodlands that provided the pigeons' primary food source—acorns and beechnuts. As these forests were fragmented, the pigeons' ability to locate sufficient food for large flocks diminished, causing malnutrition and reduced reproductive success. Third, the passenger pigeon's low genetic diversity, as inferred from museum specimens, made the species less adaptable to environmental changes, including new pathogens. Thus, while hunting may have delivered the final blow, the species was already in decline due to these natural pressures.

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The reading's argument that natural factors were the primary cause of the passenger pigeon's extinction is not convincing. In fact, the evidence points overwhelmingly to human hunting as the decisive factor, with disease and habitat loss playing only minor roles. First, consider the disease hypothesis. While trichomoniasis can affect pigeons, there is no historical record of a major epidemic among passenger pigeons before their decline. The birds' nomadic lifestyle, moving constantly to follow mast crops, actually reduced the risk of disease spread, as they did not stay in one area long enough for pathogens to build up. Moreover, the reading's claim about low genetic diversity is misleading—many bird species with low genetic diversity, such as the whooping crane, have survived for centuries. Second, habitat loss was not as severe as the reading suggests. By 1870, when the passenger pigeon population was already crashing, only about 20% of the original forest had been cleared, and large tracts of suitable habitat remained in the Midwest. The pigeons could easily have adapted to smaller forests if their numbers had not been so drastically reduced. Third, the timing of the decline aligns perfectly with commercial hunting. In the 1850s, the invention of the telegraph and the expansion of railroads allowed hunters to locate nesting colonies and ship millions of birds to urban markets. For example, in 1878, a single nesting site in Michigan was harvested for five months, yielding over 15 million birds. The population collapsed from billions to zero in just 40 years—a rate far too fast for natural factors alone. Therefore, it was human hunting, not disease or habitat loss, that drove the passenger pigeon to extinction.
📝 คำแนะนำการเขียน Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

Scored 0-30 based on holistic scoring (original 0-5, scaled to 30).

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