Escritura integrada TOEFL

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📖 Texto de lectura

The extinction of the passenger pigeon, once the most abundant bird in North America, is often attributed solely to overhunting. However, recent research suggests that a combination of factors, including deforestation and a low reproductive rate, were equally critical. First, deforestation destroyed the bird's primary nesting habitat. Passenger pigeons nested in dense, mature forests, primarily in the northeastern United States and southern Canada. As logging expanded in the late 19th century, these forests were cleared for agriculture and timber, leaving pigeons with fewer and smaller breeding areas. Second, the species had an extremely low reproductive rate. Unlike many birds that lay multiple clutches per year, passenger pigeons laid only one egg per nesting attempt. This slow reproduction meant that even moderate losses from hunting could quickly outpace the population's ability to recover. Third, the social nature of the pigeons exacerbated their decline. They nested in massive, dense colonies, sometimes covering hundreds of square miles. This made them highly vulnerable to synchronized disturbances, such as a single severe storm or a disease outbreak, which could wipe out an entire generation of chicks in one event. While overhunting was certainly a major factor, these additional pressures—habitat loss, low fecundity, and social aggregation—were essential in driving the species to extinction by 1914.

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The reading's argument that factors other than hunting were critical to the passenger pigeon's extinction is not convincing. First, deforestation was not a primary cause because the pigeons were highly adaptable. Historical records show that they could nest in secondary growth forests and even in fragmented woodlots, as long as some large trees remained. Moreover, the last large nesting site in 1896 in Ohio was in a forest that was not heavily logged, yet the population collapsed anyway. Second, the low reproductive rate was not unusual for large birds. Many birds, such as albatrosses and condors, also lay one egg per year but are not extinct—they survived because their adult mortality was low. The passenger pigeon, however, faced intense hunting pressure that killed millions of adults each year, which overwhelmed its natural reproductive capacity. The low birth rate was only a problem because hunting was so extreme. Third, the social nesting behavior was actually a protective advantage, not a vulnerability. Nesting in dense colonies offered safety from predators, as many eyes could spot danger. While a storm could destroy a single colony, the pigeons had multiple colonies across the continent, so no single event could wipe out all of them. The only factor that could explain the sudden, total collapse is the relentless, industrialized hunting that targeted nesting colonies and continued for decades, ultimately driving the species to zero.
📝 Instrucciones de escritura Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

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