TOEFL 통합 작문

📖 읽기 지문

The Industrial Revolution, which began in Britain in the late 18th century, is often celebrated as a period of unprecedented technological progress and economic growth. However, recent scholarship suggests that its overall impact on human well-being was largely negative. Three key arguments support this view. First, working conditions in factories were notoriously harsh. Laborers, including children, worked 12-16 hour days in dangerous environments, leading to widespread injuries and chronic health problems. Second, the rapid urbanization that accompanied industrialization created overcrowded, unsanitary cities. Cholera and typhoid outbreaks were common, and life expectancy in industrial centers like Manchester was significantly lower than in rural areas. Third, the economic benefits of industrialization were unevenly distributed. While factory owners amassed great wealth, the majority of workers earned subsistence wages and lived in poverty, with little opportunity for social mobility. Thus, despite advances in production, the Industrial Revolution degraded the quality of life for most people.

🎧 듣기 강의

The lecture challenges the reading's pessimistic view of the Industrial Revolution. While acknowledging harsh conditions, the professor argues that these were transitional problems that were eventually overcome. First, although factory work was difficult, it was often preferable to rural alternatives. Agricultural laborers faced seasonal unemployment and extreme poverty, whereas factory jobs provided steady wages, even if low. Moreover, labor laws gradually improved conditions, reducing hours and prohibiting child labor by the mid-19th century. Second, urbanization did lead to sanitation crises, but they prompted public health reforms. Governments invested in clean water systems and sewage infrastructure, which reduced disease mortality. By 1900, life expectancy in cities had risen above rural levels. Third, the claim that wealth was only for the elite ignores the rise of a middle class and increased consumption. Real wages for workers began to rise after 1850, and new goods, such as cheaper textiles and food imports, became accessible to ordinary families. Therefore, the Industrial Revolution ultimately raised living standards, despite early growing pains.