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📖 읽기 지문

The extinction of the dinosaurs at the end of the Cretaceous period, approximately 66 million years ago, has long fascinated scientists. While the asteroid impact theory is widely accepted, a competing hypothesis suggests that massive volcanic eruptions in the Deccan Traps of India played a more significant role. Proponents of the volcanic theory offer three main arguments. First, the Deccan Traps eruptions lasted for over a million years, releasing enormous amounts of sulfur dioxide and carbon dioxide. These gases would have caused severe global cooling and ocean acidification, creating a prolonged environmental stress that could have gradually wiped out dinosaur populations. Second, geological evidence shows that the most intense phase of volcanic activity occurred just before the Cretaceous-Paleogene boundary, coinciding with the dinosaur extinction. This timing suggests a causal link. Third, volcanic eruptions would have ejected large quantities of mercury, which has been found in sediments dating to the extinction layer, indicating that volcanic activity was a primary contributor to the environmental catastrophe. Thus, the volcanic hypothesis challenges the asteroid impact as the sole cause of the dinosaurs' demise.

🎧 듣기 강의

The lecture challenges the volcanic hypothesis presented in the reading. While the Deccan Traps eruptions were indeed massive, their environmental effects were likely not severe enough to cause a sudden extinction. First, the volcanic gases, though abundant, were released over a prolonged period, allowing ecosystems to adapt gradually. In contrast, the asteroid impact would have caused an abrupt and catastrophic cooling, known as an impact winter, which would have been far more lethal. Second, the timing of the most intense volcanic activity actually predates the extinction by about 200,000 years, not just before the boundary as the reading claims. This temporal gap weakens the argument for a direct causal link. Finally, the mercury found in the extinction layer can be explained by volcanic activity, but this does not rule out the asteroid's role. In fact, high concentrations of iridium and shocked quartz, which are characteristic of an asteroid impact, are found precisely at the boundary. These materials are not produced by volcanism. Therefore, the evidence strongly supports the asteroid impact as the primary cause, with volcanism playing only a minor, non-lethal role.
📝 작문 지시 Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

📊 TOEFL Integrated Writing Rubric

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