As the global population structure ages at an accelerating pace, many countries are confronting the dual pressures of overburdened pension systems and a steadily shrinking working-age population. Against this backdrop, some argue that governments should significantly raise the retirement age and encourage older adults to delay retirement, in order to alleviate fiscal crises and sustain economic growth. Others, however, insist that such measures not only overlook the physical and health limitations of older workers, but may also exacerbate youth unemployment and deprive the elderly of their right to enjoy later life. Please share your views on this controversy, providing sufficient reasons and concrete examples to support your position.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确