With the proliferation of remote work technology, an increasing number of companies are allowing employees to fulfill all their job responsibilities from home. However, some argue that this model undermines team collaboration and innovation, while others firmly believe it grants employees greater autonomy, thereby enhancing work efficiency and work-life balance. In your view, does the widespread adoption of remote work have a positive or negative impact on modern workplace culture? Please articulate your stance, supported by specific reasons and examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling