As demographic structures shift dramatically across the globe, many developed and developing countries are simultaneously confronting the dual pressures of a shrinking labor force and a rising old-age dependency ratio. One perspective argues that governments should prioritize their limited fiscal resources toward policies that extend the retirement age and encourage immigration to sustain economic vitality; another voice warns, however, that such an approach may neglect the medical care and social dignity of the elderly, potentially triggering a crisis of intergenerational equity. Discuss both positions and propose how governments should balance economic sustainability with social well-being, using specific country or regional examples to support your argument.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确