When a city reshapes its historic districts to cater to international tourists, is the cultural identity of local residents inevitably diluted? Some argue that commercialization is the only way to keep traditions "alive," while others insist that true preservation must reject tourist-oriented transformations. Discuss both positions and explain which one you believe better upholds cultural authenticity. Provide reasons and cite specific examples to support your view.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling