As average life expectancy continues to rise in most countries around the world, retirement ages often remain anchored to standards set decades ago, placing pension systems under severe strain while younger generations bear an increasingly heavy burden of supporting the elderly. However, mandatorily delaying retirement could also squeeze job opportunities for youth and overlook health disparities among manual laborers. Between extending working years and ensuring intergenerational equity, which side should take precedence in policy-making? Please draw on examples from specific countries to articulate your stance and justify your reasoning.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确