As demographic structures in major cities worldwide undergo profound transformation, one perspective holds that the growing elderly population places a heavy burden on socioeconomic development, while another firmly believes that a longevity society can instead spawn new industrial opportunities and foster intergenerational wisdom transfer. In your view, which stance better aligns with the realities of the society you live in? Provide reasons and support your argument with concrete examples—such as the local job market, healthcare resource allocation, and innovation in the eldercare industry.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确