As remote work technology becomes increasingly sophisticated, many companies have completely abandoned physical offices. However, some argue that long-term work from home undermines employees' career advancement opportunities and team cohesion, while others insist that remote work grants individuals greater autonomy, thereby enhancing overall job satisfaction. To what extent do you believe that the proliferation of remote work does more good than harm to career development? Please present your viewpoint, supported by reasons and concrete examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling