As remote work technology becomes increasingly sophisticated, many companies have already allowed employees to work from home permanently. However, some argue that this model undermines team collaboration and organizational culture, while others firmly believe it significantly enhances employees' quality of life and work autonomy. Which side's position do you think better aligns with the long-term interests of the modern workplace? Please provide your viewpoint, supporting it with specific reasons and examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling