In light of the intensifying global trend of population aging, some argue that raising the retirement age is the only viable solution to address pension shortfalls and a shrinking workforce, while others insist that mandatorily extending working years would deprive older adults of their quality of life and squeeze out job opportunities for the younger generation. In your view, which of these two positions is more compelling? Please provide your reasons and support your argument with concrete examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确