As remote work technology becomes more widespread, many companies no longer require employees to commute to the office daily. However, proponents of this work model argue that it grants employees greater autonomy over their lives, while critics worry that it undermines team cohesion and fairness in career advancement. Do you believe that the proliferation of remote work brings more benefits than drawbacks to employees' career development, or more drawbacks than benefits? Please state your position and provide specific reasons and examples to support your viewpoint.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling