In many countries, the proportion of elderly people continues to rise, while the young workforce steadily declines. Some argue that raising the retirement age is a necessary measure to sustain economic vitality; others insist that this would deprive younger generations of promotion and employment opportunities. In your view, how should the pros and cons of delaying the retirement age be weighed in an aging society? Please present your perspective, supported by specific reasons and examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确