In many developed countries, the proportion of elderly populations continues to rise, while younger generations are entering the workforce and starting families later than ever. Some argue that extending the retirement age and encouraging older adults to keep working is the only realistic solution to alleviate pressure on pension systems and labor shortages; others insist that this only squeezes the promotion prospects of younger workers and exacerbates intergenerational inequity. In your view, which side's argument holds more weight? Please state your position and support it with specific reasons and examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确