As globalization deepens, traditional festival celebrations in many places are being replaced by internationalized commercial activities, while others argue that this shift is a natural manifestation of cultural vitality. Between preserving cultural roots and embracing global trends, should tradition be maintained at all costs, or is its adaptation and decline simply the norm of cultural evolution? Please articulate your stance, citing specific examples from countries or communities to support your argument.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling