As globalization continues to deepen, traditional festivals in many countries are increasingly being reshaped by commercialization, while younger generations seem more drawn to internationalized ways of celebration. However, some argue that this very commercialization breathes new life into endangered cultures, allowing them to endure. When the core meaning of traditional festivals is redefined by consumerism, is cultural authenticity being sacrificed? Or, to maintain cultural vitality, is adapting to the trends of the times inevitable? Please state your position and justify it with specific cultural examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确