As remote work technology matures and becomes more widespread, many companies have begun allowing employees to work entirely from home. However, some argue that this diminishes team cohesion and opportunities for professional growth, while others firmly believe it is an inevitable trend toward achieving work-life balance. In your view, does the proliferation of remote work ultimately benefit or harm employees' long-term career development? Please state your position and provide specific reasons and examples to support your viewpoint.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling