As globalization accelerates, the traditional customs and celebrations of many nations are gradually being supplanted by internationalized commercial holidays. Some argue that this cultural convergence helps foster global identity and exchange, while opponents worry that it will lead to the erosion of local distinctiveness and the weakening of values passed down through generations. In the face of this trend, should local societies prioritize embracing cultural fusion, or should they go to great lengths to preserve their unique traditions? Please articulate your stance, providing reasons and concrete examples to support your viewpoint.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling