As birth rates continue to decline and life expectancy extends across many countries worldwide, population aging has evolved from a localized phenomenon into a global trend. In addressing this shift, some advocate for raising the retirement age and encouraging older adults to remain in the labor force, aiming to alleviate the burden on public finances and sustain economic growth. Others, however, argue that such measures overlook health disparities and occupational burnout among the elderly, and may instead crowd out employment opportunities for younger generations while weakening family caregiving functions. In your view, which strategy for coping with an aging society is more reasonable? Please present your opinion, supported by specific reasons and real-world examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确