In many developed countries, the proportion of elderly people continues to rise, while the share of younger workers steadily shrinks. In response to this trend, some argue that raising the retirement age is the only viable solution to sustain economic vitality; others contend that a wiser approach lies in redistributing existing jobs and encouraging automation technologies to create space for younger generations. Discuss both positions and explain which one you support, providing specific reasons and examples to substantiate your view.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确