As globalization continues to advance, traditional festivals in many places are gradually being replaced by internationalized commercial celebrations. Regarding this phenomenon, some worry that local cultural identity will be weakened as a result, while others see it as a natural outcome of cultural exchange, one that can even breathe new life into traditions. In your view, does the commercialization and globalization of traditional festivals represent a loss of cultural heritage, or is it a necessary evolution for culture to adapt to the times? Please state your position and support it with specific examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确