As the proportion of young workers in many cities around the world declines year by year while the retired population continues to grow, some argue that raising the statutory retirement age is a necessary means to sustain economic vitality, while others contend that it deprives the younger generation of employment opportunities. In your view, which position is more compelling? Please elaborate on your perspective, supported by specific reasons and examples to bolster your argument.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确