As remote work technology becomes increasingly sophisticated, a growing number of companies are allowing employees to work entirely from home. However, some worry that this practice may weaken team cohesion and hinder the career development of younger employees. In your view, are the benefits of fully remote work for individual career growth sufficient to offset the potential risks of missing social interaction and mentorship? Please state your position and justify it with reasons and examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling