As multinational corporations expand into global markets, many local traditional festivals are gradually losing their original cultural significance, being replaced by commercialized "consumer carnivals." However, some argue that this commercialization is precisely the only viable way for traditions to survive in contemporary society. To what extent do you believe that the commercialization of traditional culture inevitably leads to the loss of its essence? Please state your position and support it with examples from specific countries or communities.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确