As remote work technology matures, many companies have fully abandoned the traditional office model. However, surveys indicate that some employees feel their career growth has stalled due to a lack of face-to-face interaction and real-time collaboration. Between efficiency gains and career development, does remote work truly grant employees greater autonomy, or does it quietly erode their invisible competitiveness in the workplace? Please discuss both perspectives and, based on your own insights, explain how companies should balance these two working models.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling