As international tourism flourishes, an increasing number of unique cultural practices from remote regions are being commercially packaged for tourist consumption. Meanwhile, some critics argue that this "cultural commodification" is eroding the authentic meaning of traditions. Discuss: To what extent is transforming traditional culture into tourism experience products a legitimate form of heritage preservation, rather than a distortion? Please support your position and reasoning with specific examples.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling