As commercialization of traditional festivals deepens across nations, some argue this trend aids cultural preservation and global dissemination, while others worry it dilutes cultural essence. Against the backdrop of globalization, is the commercialization of traditional festivals a win-win bridge or an inevitable cultural erosion? Elaborate on your stance, providing reasons and examples to support it.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应（Task Response）：是否完整回应题目要求，观点是否清晰，论证是否充分
连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion）：段落组织是否合理，逻辑是否清晰，连接词是否恰当
词汇资源（Lexical Resource）：词汇是否丰富、准确，搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）：句式是否多样，语法是否正确