In the tide of globalization, many local traditional festivals are gradually being replaced by international commercial celebrations, while other communities are strengthening their cultural identity through the revival of ancient rituals. Faced with this tension, do you believe that preserving traditional culture should take precedence over embracing the cultural fusion brought about by globalization? Please articulate your stance and support your argument with specific examples from countries or regions.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors
Task Response: Address all parts of the task, present a clear position, support ideas with evidence
Coherence and Cohesion: Logical paragraphing, clear progression, appropriate linking devices
Lexical Resource: Wide range of vocabulary, accurate and natural collocations
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Variety of sentence structures, error-free grammar
Overall band score is 0-9, each criterion weighted equally.
Answering Tips
Spend 5 minutes planning your position and main arguments
Use the structure: Introduction - Body 1 - Body 2 - Concession - Conclusion
Develop each body paragraph with: topic sentence + explanation + example + summary
Use a variety of linking words, avoid repetition
Reserve 5 minutes at the end to check grammar and spelling