As globalization advances, many traditional festivals in various places have gradually become commercialized, while others insist that these festivals should preserve their original cultural significance. When a country becomes increasingly reliant on tourism to drive economic growth, is it inevitable that the core values of traditional festivals will be diminished? Please articulate your stance and explain to what extent commercialization poses a greater threat to cultural heritage than the opportunities it brings. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your viewpoint.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确