As the proportion of elderly residents continues to rise in many major cities worldwide, one perspective holds that governments should channel the majority of resources into improving eldercare facilities and medical services. Another view argues that if cities focus excessively on the older population, they risk diminishing their appeal to young talent, thereby undermining urban economic vitality. In your view, how should policymakers balance these two demands when planning for the future of their cities? Please state your position and support it with specific reasons and examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确