As demographic structures in many major cities around the world undergo significant transformation, the proportion of elderly individuals continues to rise while the share of younger workers gradually declines. Some argue that this trend will inevitably increase the burden on society and hinder economic growth; others contend that an aging society can instead foster new industrial opportunities and promote intergenerational cultural heritage.
In light of these two conflicting perspectives, do you believe the impact of aging on society leans more toward challenges or opportunities? Please state your position and support it with specific reasons and examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确