As global life expectancy continues to rise, many countries are undergoing an unprecedented demographic transition toward aging societies. Against this backdrop, some argue that raising the retirement age is an inevitable choice to alleviate pension pressures and labor shortages, while others insist that it will deprive younger generations of promotion opportunities and exacerbate intergenerational inequity. Based on your knowledge and experience, which side do you lean toward? Please provide reasons and support your argument with concrete examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确